This is absolutely gorgeous! I know the feeling and you have described it well

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"You and I, we live and die. The world still spins around we don't know why." -Oasis

~preppie16 go on and get your kicks

you are soooo obsessed with a particular womeone

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"the sooner i die, the less work i have to do" ~ me

>>Carolina Deviants<<

you are soooo obsessed with a particular someone

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"the sooner i die, the less work i have to do" ~ me

>>Carolina Deviants<<

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When words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs.
When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence.
Ansel Adams

That is wonderful, it's so much deeper to me than just that.

Wow. There's a lot of meaning wrapped up in those words, a lot of commitment as well. They must really mean a lot to you.
I like this poem because of the commitment in it that I could never bring myself to write. It's the simple, honest yet powerfull love, void of the suffering that plauges my own writings.

Very nice

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... for once, we feel as though we can love ourselves, and sometimes we grow to understand ourselves through that other person, but then we also want to make excuses for them when they aren't the right person or have flaws

That is the most elogant and thought-out comment I have ever recieved on anything. There is alot of love and comitment in this poem, you're right. There is alot of love and comitment towards that person. I've learned that the best poetry comes when you let go of yourself, and your fear of what people would say and/or think and just write your heart. I didn't want her to read all this. I didn't think she was ready to read this yet, but I let her read it. She loved it, but it scared her. She's NOT ready to read it yet, but a few weeks later, we talked on the same subjects and because she had already been exposed to the amount of love that I showed her in the poem, it was easier for her to hear all I had to tell her. That night was good. A lot of good things were said that needed to be said, and our relationship is stronger now. Wait... why am I writing all this? Basic thing is just write from your heart, and people will love it.

-Alex

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He must increase, but I must decrese. - John 3:30

"God, can I lay hands on him THEN pray for him?"